The 4 most historically significant events in the Middle Ages?

MeMyselForWho · 3 months

Homophone!

rhetoricjams · 4 months

You are missing my point completely. You're not very good at the style you're aiming for. You sound like you aren't sure of yourself at all.

RecThisCityMgmt · 5 months

ZOMG GOOD FLOW WITH LAZY LYRICS.

Seriously, this dude is spitting generic ish. Not impressed.

mantisx3 · 5 months

First off you are the one rapping in this. Second, obvious written parts are obvious written parts. Third, it wasn't bad.

rhetoricjams · 5 months

Your lyrics are cocky. You delivery is not, it's not suited for that.

Either change your delivery to suite your lyrics or do something more original that pertains to how you sound. How is that hate?

Just so you know, I could blow smoke up your ass and you wouldn't improve at all. Being blunt and honest is the best way to inspire someone to elevate.

rhetoricjams · 5 months

You obviously don't want criticism.

My advice is join a forum and listen to their feed back.

cafink · 5 months

I didn't think this movie was very good.

Ebert, I am disappoint.

N8Coleon · 5 months

Newton didn't know half as much as any physics grad does now.

Making something popular is not perfecting it.

N8Coleon · 5 months

Maybe back in 95.

rhetoricjams · 5 months

I'm serious man. Some people's voices are suited for certain music. Vinnie Paz could never do RnB. R Kelly could never do Canibus.

N8Coleon · 5 months

Music is subjective.

Despite that Big L is highly overrated.

N8Coleon · 5 months

Punchline wise, no.

N8Coleon · 5 months

Diabolic's hidden verse is better than any verse Big L ever spit

One of the best in hip-hop: www.youtube.com/watch?v=A0Nlbz4ow6E

In Vakill's case: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HFLJsxqXoJg

N8Coleon · 5 months

Lyrically? Definitely not. My top 3 have better mutlies.

N8Coleon · 5 months

Big L does not have a big catalog.

Just because he died does not make him the best.

timishu · 5 months

I do mostly conceptual ish but here are a few of mine

"Poison in my pen, you're just gassed up, Auschwitz"

"There's a thin line between sick rhymes and sayin nothin bro

I herd/heard you go over the edge like wild buffalo"

"I get my point across like crucifixion"

"I gotta stick out more than blind people"

This is me btw: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iBcQtPFP5Ug

timishu · 5 months

Hmmm then you mean those bars are weak? Perfect multies are a lot better than weak punchlines which is what this thread is full of. Diabolic, Vakill, & Copywrite are unmatched at punchlines btw.

timishu · 5 months

I take it you found my Youtube account?

timishu · 5 months

"It's Joseph McCarthy patrollin the party//

While you claimin you ran the block with the Soviet Army" - Escrol

"It's the Mayan astrologist, sign of apocalypse//

Broadcast from the gut of Chernobyl's iron sarcophagus//" - Bender

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i3r5MJp_ABc

timishu · 5 months

That, or because it's easy as fuck..

jojojoy · 5 months

Implying girls watched LOTR

jojojoy · 5 months

Downvote for a Youtube-esque comment

EDIT: Bring the hate. Let the downvotes rain from a tar colored sky. Originality died today.

N8Coleon

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